Kamis, 31 Oktober 2013

NARRATIVE STORY


PART A
THE HISTORY OF PROPHET ILYAS (PBUH) OR ELIJAH

Once upon a time, on 910-850 BC there lived ahandsome man named prophet Ilyas bin Yasinor Elijah in Ba’labak, a place in Lebanon. Elijah was the child of Israel, fourth son of Prophet Harun (PBUH).His people were Fenisia people who worshiped of Ba'al statues. Allah ordered Elijah toinvite his family and Fenisia people to leave the worship of statues and only worship to Allah, or in other word, Elijah had to invite them to be moslems.
Elijah never gave up to call his people to leave paganism or the worshipers of idols, but they were very defiant and mocked him. Elijah killed the prophet of ba’al. King Ahab and his wife Izaibil were very angry with him to hear that, because they were worshipers ofba’al.Theyplanned to kill Elijah. Elijah escaped to JabalTsur (Sinai mountain), because he was afraid to be killed by them. The angles gave him bread and water. Then, Allah punished the pagansby the arrival of the long dry season for many years . There was no water at all. Crops and livestocks died lying, people felt difficult to get waterfor drinking, so they were very miserable. Most of them got many of diseases, and died.
Then the pagans remembered Elijah, so they came to him and asked, “Elijah, please pray to your God  for the rain, I promised surely to repent and follow your teachings for worshiping Allah.”Elijah prayed and the heavy rain cameimmadietly. All of the agricultural landswere back to normal, Lebanon’s economy rised quickly, and the situation became peaceful again.
After they lived normally, they broke their promises and returned to worshiping idols.Consequently, the other punishment of Allahcame suddenly . They got very powerful earthquake; as a result, they died directly . Only prophet Ilyas and his followers were saved by Allah. They lived happily ever after.



ANALYSYS:
THE GENERIC STRUCTURE, SOCIAL FUNCION, SENTENCE STRUCTURES, AND THE MORAL VALUES TO BE TRANSMITTED FROM THE STORY

NARRATIVE STORY
Social Function: to amuse or entertain the readers and to deal with actual or various experience in different ways;  Narratives deal with problematic events which lead to a crisis or turning point of some kind, which in turn finds its resolution.
THE GENERIC STRUCTURES
PROPHET ILYAS (PBUH)
THE STRUCTURE OF THE SENTENCES
ORIENTATION
Sees the scene and introduces the participants.
(can be paragraph, a picture or opening chapter) in which the narrator tells the audience about who in the story, whenthe sory is taking place and where the action is happening.
Once upon a time, on 910-850 BD[5] there lived[1]a handsome man3 named prophet Ilyas bin Yasin or Elijah[2] in Ba’labak, a place in Lebanon[5]. Elijah was[1] the child of Israel, fourth son of Prophet Harun (PBUH).His people were[1]Fenisia people who worshiped[1] of Ba'al statues. Allah ordered[1]Elijah toinvite his familyand Fenisia people to leave the worship of statues and only worship to Allah, or in other word, Elijah had to[1]invite them to be moslems.

1.      Use of Past Tense
2.      Focus on specific and usually individualized Participant
e.g. Prophet Ilyas
3.      The use of noun phrases
4.      The use of connectives and conjunction
5.      The use of adverbial phrases of time and place
COMPLICATION
A crisis arises
That sets off a chain of events that influence what will happen in the story
Elijah never gave up[1] to call his people to leave paganism or the worshipers of idols, but they were[1] very defiant and mocked1 him. Elijah killed[1,6] the prophet of ba’al. King Ahab and his wife Izaibilwere1very angry[9]with him to hear[10] that, because they were[1]worshipersofba’al.Theyplanned[1,6] to kill Elijah. Elijah escaped[1,6] to JabalTsur (Sinai mountain), because he was[1]afraid[9] to be killed by them. The angles gave1 him bread and water. Then, Allah punished[1,6]the pagansby the arrival of the long dry season[3] for many years . There was[1] no water at all. Crops and livestocksdied[1] lying, people felt[1,8]difficult to get water for drinking, so they were[1] very miserable. Most of them got many of diseases, and died[1].

6.      The use of material process (action verbs)
7.      The use of saying verbs
8.      The use of thinking verbs,
9.      The use of feeling verbs,
10.  verbs of senses
RESOLUTION
The crisis is solved, for better or for worse.
In which the characters finally sort out or solve the complication
Then[4] the pagansremembered[1,6]Elijah , so they came1,6to him and asked[1,6,7], “Elijah, please pray to your God  for the rain, I promised[1,6] surely to repent and follow your teachings for worshiping Allah.”Elijah prayed[1,6] andthe heavy rain[3]came[1]immadietly. All of the agricultural landswere[1]back to normal, Lebanon’s economy rised quickly, and the situation became[1] peaceful again.


RE-ORIENTATION
(optional)
After they lived[1] normally, they broke[1,6] their promises and returned[1,6] to worshiping idols.Consequently, the other punishment of Allahcame[1] suddenly . They got[1]very powerful earthquake[3]; as a result, they died[1] directly. Only prophet Ilyas and his followers were saved[1] by Allah. They lived[1] happily ever after.


THE VALUES TO BE TRANSMITTED (CODA)
(optional)
That provides a comment or moral based on what has been learned from the story
1.      As moslems, we don’t permitted to worship other Allah (paganism)
2.      We have to follow our prophets
3.      Don’t act the bad things, because Allah will give you punishments
4.      Never mock someone
5.      Don’t be evil, tell lies, and break your promises
6.      Don’t do the same faults after you repent
7.      Be patience to face your problems
8.      Let’s improve our behavior to be better again.









PART B
EXERCISES
I.       Answer the questions below with the appropriate answers based on the story.
1.      Where did Elijah live?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
2.      Was Elijah the fourth son or the first son of prophet Harun (PBUH)?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
3.      Who were the people of Elijah?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
4.      Did Elijah invite his family and his people to be moslems?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
5.      Did Elijah give up to call his people to leave paganism or the worshipers of idols?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
6.      Were the evil pagans mocked Elijah or they followed him?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
7.      Who were planned to kill Elijah and why did they do like that?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
8.      How did Allah punish the evil pagansat first and howwere the conditions?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
9.      Did the evil pagans remember prophet Ilyas (PBUH) after got the first punishment?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
10.  Did they want to Elijah prayed for the rain?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
11.  Did the rain come heavily or drizzle?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
12.  What did happen after the heavy rain came immadiately?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
13.  Did they return to worshiping idols or Allah after live peacefully ?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
14.  What did they get as the next punishment from Allah?
Answer:.............................................................................................................
15.  Were only prophet Ilyas (PBUH) and his followers saved by Allah?
Answer:.............................................................................................................


II.                Fill in the blank with the appropriate answer
(1). . . . . , on 910-850 BD there lived a handsome man named prophet Ilyas bin Yasin or Elijah in Ba’labak, a place in Lebanon. Elijah was the child of Israel, fourth son of Prophet Harun (PBUH).His people were Fenisia people who worshiped of Ba'al statues. Allah ordered Elijah (2) . . . . . his family and Fenisia people to leave the worship of statues and only worship to Allah, or in other word, Elijah had to invite them to be moslems.
Elijah never gave up to call his people to leave paganism or the worshipers of idols, but they were very defiant and mocked him. Elijah killed the prophet of ba’al. King Ahab and his wife Izaibil were very (3) . . . . . with him to hear that, because they were worshipers ofba’al.Theyplanned to kill Elijah. Elijah escaped to JabalTsur (Sinai mountain), because he was afraid to be killed by them. The angles gave him bread and water. Then, Allah punished the pagansby the arrival of the long dry season for many years . There was no water at all. Crops and livestocks died lying, people felt difficult to get water for drinking, so they were very miserable. Most of them got many of diseases, and died.
Then the pagans remembered Elijah , so they came to him and asked, “Elijah, please pray to your God  for the rain, I promised surely to repent and follow your teachings for worshiping Allah.”Elijah prayed and the heavy rain cameimmadietly. All of the agricultural landswere back to normal, Lebanon’s economy rised (4) . . . . . , and the situation became peaceful again.
After they lived normally, they broke their promises and returned to worshiping idols.Consequently, the other punishment of Allahcame suddenly . They got very (5) . . . . . . . earthquake; as a result, they died directly . Only prophet Ilyas and his followers were saved by Allah. They lived happily ever after.

a.       proud                                                   f. to call
b.      trivial                                                   g. hard                        
c.       A long time ago                                  h. fast
d.      improve                                               i. crude
e.       Look black                                          j. strong



III.             Match the following sentences
1.      Worshiper of Idols                                          a. Elijah and his followers
2.      The relationship between Elijah and Harun    b. paganism
3.      The pagans’ planning                                      c. long dry season
4.      There was no water at all                                d. 4th son of Harun                 
5.      Saved from the earthquake                             e. kill Elijah
                                                                                                                                   
IV.             Find the meaning of the new vocabularies below in your dictionary.
1.      Mock
2.      escape
3.      Crop
4.      Miserable
5.      Disease

a.       Pious                                                         f. run away
b.      Field                                                          g. trust
c.       Unhappiness                                              h. danger
d.      Safe                                                           i. insult
e.       Illness                                                        j. harvest


V.                Write down the new sentences using the same structures in Past tense.
Example:

Elijah (invite) his family and his people to leave the worship of statues and only worship to Allah.
Answer:Elijah invited his family and his people to leave the worship of statues and only to Allah.

1.      I (study) Geography yesterday with a handsome teacher from Jakarta.
Answer:..........................................................................................................
2.      All of the agricultural lands(be) back to normal.
Answer:..........................................................................................................
3.      When I (arrive), my mother (be sleep) on the bedroom, my father(be read) the newspaper, and my sister (be do) her homework in the living room.
Answer:..........................................................................................................
4.      Elijah and his followers (not) die in the powerful earthquake.
Answer:..........................................................................................................
5.      My math note book (be find) by Alicia at the school mosque. (passive voice)
Answer:..........................................................................................................


VI.             Arrange and then write down the sentences below into a good paragraph based on the story!
1.      Allah punished the pagansby the arrival of the long dry season for many years.
2.      So, Elijah invited his family to leave the worship of statues and only worship to Allah, or in other word, Elijah invited them to be moslems.
3.      Elijah prayed and the heavy rain cameimmadietly.
4.      They broke their promises, and returned to worshiping idols.
5.      But, the evil pagans were very defiant and mocked himand even planned to kill Elijah.
6.      The Prophet Ilyas (PBUH) and his followers were saved only by Allah.
7.      Prophet Ilyas (PBUH) was the fourth son of Prophet Harun (PBUH) and his followers were called worshipers of Ba'al statues.
8.      They came to him and asked him to pray for the rain and promised surely to repent, follow the teachings of Elijah, and worship only to Allah.
9.      All of the agricultural landswere back to normal, Lebanon’s economy rised quickly, and the situation became peaceful again .
10.  They got very powerful earthquake; as a result, they died directly.


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PART C
THE KEY ANSWERS

I.                   Answering the questions based on the story.
1.      Elijah lived in Ba’labak, a place in Lebanon.
2.      Elijahwas the fourth descendant of prophet Harun (PBUH).
3.      The people of Elijah were Fenisia people who worshiped of Ba'al statues.
4.      Yes, he did. Elijah invited his family to be moslems.
5.      No, he didn’t.Elijah never gave up to call his people to leave paganisma or the worshipers of idols.
6.      Yes, they were. The evil pagans were very defiant and mocked him.
7.      King Ahab and his wife Izaibilplanned to kill Elijah, because they were worshipers ofba’al, so they were very angry with him when they heard that Elijah killed the prophet of ba’al.
8.      Allah punishedthe evil pagansat first by the arrival of the long dry season for many years and the conditions were there was no water at all, crops and livestocks died lying, people felt difficult to get water for drinking, so they were very miserable. Most of them got many of diseases, and died.
9.      Yes, they did. The evil pagans remembered prophet Ilyas (PBUH) after got the first punishment.
10.  Yes, they did. They wanted to Elijah prayed for the rain.
11.  The rain came heavily immadietly.
12.  After the heavy rain cameimmadaitely, all of the agricultural landswere back to normal, Lebanon’s economy rised quickly, and the situation became peaceful again.
13.  After got peaceful life, they returned to worshiping idols.
14.  As the next punishment from Allah, they got very powerful earthquake; as a result, they died directly.
15.  Yes, they were.Prophet Ilyas (PBUH) and his followers were savedonly by Allah.

II.                Filling in the blank with the appropriate answer
1.      c. a long time ago
2.      f. to call
3.      e. look black at
4.      h. fast
5.      j. strong

III.             Matching the sentences on the left row with the appropriate sentences on the right row
1.      b. paganism
2.      d. 4th son of Harun
3.      e. kill Elijah
4.      c. long dry season
5.      a. Elijah and his followers

IV.             Finding the meanings of the new vocabularies on the dictionary
1.      i. insult
2.      f. run away
3.      j. harvest
4.      c. unhappiness
5.      e. illness

V.                Writing down the new sentences using the same structures in Past tense.
1.      I studied Geography yesterday with a handsome teacher from Jakarta.
2.      All of the agricultural landswereback to normal .
3.      When I arrived, my mother was sleepingon the bedroom, my fatherwas readingthe newspaper, and my sister was doingher homework in the living room.
4.      Elijah and his followers did not die in the powerful earthquake.
5.      My math note book was foundby Alicia at the school mosque.


VI.             Arranging and writing down the sentences into a good paragraph.

(7-2-5-1-8-3-9-4-10-6)

Prophet Ilyas (PBUH) was the fourth son of Prophet Harun (PBUH) and his followers were called worshipers of Ba'al statues. So, Elijah invited his family to leave the worship of statues and only worship to Allah, or in other word, Elijah invited them to be moslems. But, the evil pagans were very defiant and mocked himand even planned to kill Elijah. Allah punished the pagansby the arrival of the long dry season for many years.They came to him and asked him to pray for the rain and promised surely to repent, follow the teachings of Elijah, and worship only to Allah.Elijah prayed and the heavy rain cameimmadietly. All of the agricultural landswere back to normal, Lebanon’s economy rised quickly, and the situation became peaceful again .They broke their promises, and returned to worshiping idols. They got very powerful earthquake; as a result, they died directly.The Prophet Ilyas (PBUH) and his followers were saved only by Allah.


30/10/2013


Laily Nur Iffah Sari


 
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1st Analysis of "A HYMN TO GOD THE FATHER" Poetry

A HYMN TO GOD THE FATHER

Wilt Thou forgive that sin where I begun,
Which was my sin though it were done before?
Wilt Thou forgive those sin through which I run,
And do them still, though still I do deplore?
When Thou hast done, Thou hast not done,
For I have more.

Wilt Thou forgive that sin by which I won
Others to sin, and made my sin their door?
Wilt Thou forgive that sin which I did shun
A year or two, but wallowed in a score?
When Thou hast done, Thou hast not done,
For I have more.

I have a sin of fear, that when I have spun
My last thread, I shall perish on the shore;
Swear by Thyself that at my death Thy Sun
Shall shine as it shines now, and heretofore;
And having done that, Thou hast done.
I have no more.

John Donne (1572-1631)



THE ANALYSYS OF POEM “A HYMN TO GOD THE FATHER”

In my opinion, the poem “A Hymn to God the Father” by John Donne which consists of three stanzas and each stanza has six lines, is a religion poem, because it addresses to God. That can be seen from the title of  the poem, we can understand that the writer wrote a hymn or a song to God. He asks the God for forgiveness for all of his mistakes, and it seems that he wants to repent from them. The background of the problem is about “sins” that he has done. He feels so regret for his sins, fear about the day he will die, but he always hopes and faiths that God will forgive all of his sins. The writer expresses his feelings of deploring, fear, and faithful.
Dictionary definitions of words that called denotative meaning, we can find it out at the poem. “A Hymn To God The Father” as the title of the poem can show that the poem is a song which the writer always uses to pray to God. He prays for the God’s forgiveness to his sins that he has done, because he deplores about them and he afraid about  his death. As well, “God The Father” in Christian means Jesus, the only one God that they worship. In the first and second stanza, “door” means thing that can be opened and closed to inn or exit from a building or room. Simply, “Score” is a mark used as a starting point or goal and keeping account. Still, most of words also consists of connotative meanings. “Forgive” for most of us is associated with love of God to human, sincerely, and “sin” is associated with the evil habits, be up to something, bad attitude that the writer has done in the past. However, in imagery the poem, words that are concrete denote things we can actually see or feel in some way, that is only “door”. We see a door as the object of something. But in the poem, “door” is abstract denote. Let’s look the sentence in the second line of the second stanza, “Others to sin, and made my sin their door?”. We may presume that the door is same meaning with one’s life. Other people make sins in their life, and also the writer. In addition, the other abstract denote can be found in word “Forgive”. In the poem, we read Wilt Thou forgive that sin where I begun, Wilt Thou forgive that sin, through which I run, Wilt Thou forgive that sin which I have won, Wilt Thou forgive that sin which I did shun”. When human make sins, God forgive them in advance and at the end of them. Furthermore, “And do them still, though still I do deplore?”, we found many of presumes at the word. When someone deplore, we may presume that people are full of many emotions. They may be afraid, look blue, confused, silent, be at the end of their tether or rope, and also they may want to cry or scream loudly to express their deplorings or sins in the past. Then, “A year or two, but wallowed in a score”, we understand completely that the writer regrets from his sins for many years. He faiths with God that God will forgive his sins before he died, and he always hopes and prays for that.

But in addition to the denotative meaning, in the third stanza, “thread”, clearly, is a group of filaments twisted together formed by spinning and twisting short textile fibers into a continuous strand.  Also, “shore” means place like a beach, the land bordering a usually large body of water. The last is “Sun” that has the denotative meaning as the star round which the earth moves and which gives it heat and light, not to mention the connotative meaning is the noon, keep our end up, or happiness. We have a word “fear”, is assosiated with confiousness, worry, stress, trouble, or full of problems that appear in our life. Besides, the last word in the thirteen line, “spun” is assosiated with moving, rotate, and revolve. In life, human will move from one to other conditions, until they come to and end, or in other words, they will die. In the same stanza, “perish” means that people haven’t long life, and they will die at the end of their life. “Swear by Thyself that at my death thy Sun shall shine as it shines now, and heretofore; and having done that, Thou hast done”, this sentence show that the writer wants to get the peace and happiness in his life or in his death after God forgive all of his sins.
So, this poem is about “Asking for forgiveness to God about Sins”. Look here, people who make many of sins in the past want to repent, and asks for God’s forgiveness before he died. It comes because his fear of death, so he is very faithful to hope the forgiveness from the God. After he got the forgiveness, he wants to get rid of all of his sins; therefore, he can life and rest in peace.


                                                 10/30/2013


                                                 ( Laily Nur Iffah Sari)


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Kamis, 04 April 2013

Nonverbal Communication

          Nonverbal communication, or body language, is used everywhere in the world, because it is a very powerful means of communication, and it communicates much more then spoken words.
          One example of nonverbal communication is what occurs between parents and child, that parents smile at their child. They communicate love, acceptance, and reassurance, so the child feels comfortable and safe. The smile signifies approval, for he child is happy and well adjusted.
         Another example of nonverbal communication is the image a person shows in public. A woman is walking alone on an unfamiliar and possibly dangerous street, for she wants to appear confident. She walks quickly;as a result, she may be tired. She walks with her shoulders straight and her head held high; also, her eyes are focused straight ahead. Someone is looking at her, but she returns the glance without hesitation. In contrast, a nervous woman appears afraid, so she walks slowly with her shoulders and eyes down.
         Indeed, body language can express more than spoken language; for instance, merely by raising an eyebrow, clenching a jaw, or softening the eyes, a person can express disapproval, anger ,or love, and it is very strong method of communication.

(Compound Complex Sentences)

Equal Rights for Women

          Russian women started to gain equality earlier than women in the aunited States, because in the former Soviet Union, men and woman had access to equal education and job opportunities, and that reflected the Soviet philosophy. Since the 1937 Soviet constitution declared that women and men had equal rights and responbilities, and women joined the workforce; as soon as, also millions of Russian men were away in the military during World War II, so Russian women filled their places at work. Although Soviet women worked full time at their jobs, but they also  had the primary responsibility for taking care of the family, when they finished their work, and they had to shop, cook the evening meal, and perhaps wash, iron, or mend the family's clothes. After U.S. women started to demonstrate that, they could do the work of men during World War II.

(Compound Complex Sentences)